The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your descriptions, especially those in the park. Your parade of charades you mc participated in are sad, but I was glad that the ending was a happy one. God accepts us as we are, and, at our confession, forgives us.
This is truly a sad situation and the hurt and emotion is so raw in the writing.
Excellent writing, definitely the best I've read so far on this level. I hope this one does well.
Hi: I like the contrast of your story - drew me in to read more - good ending - thank you.
Bella, I'm going to feature this piece in the Front Page Showcase for the week of January 19. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page, and congratulations!
Great story! Thank God for mercy, grace and the gift of forgivenes. Without it, the guiltl is unbearable. Thanks for showing us a way out.
It's good to see this story high-lighted on the Front Page. Your message is so good. Congratulations.