The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your descriptions, especially those in the park. Your parade of charades you mc participated in are sad, but I was glad that the ending was a happy one. God accepts us as we are, and, at our confession, forgives us.
This is truly a sad situation and the hurt and emotion is so raw in the writing.
08/23/08
Excellent writing, definitely the best I've read so far on this level. I hope this one does well.
08/24/08
Hi: I like the contrast of your story - drew me in to read more - good ending - thank you.
12/31/08
Bella, I'm going to feature this piece in the Front Page Showcase for the week of January 19. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page, and congratulations!
01/22/09
Great story! Thank God for mercy, grace and the gift of forgivenes. Without it, the guiltl is unbearable. Thanks for showing us a way out.
01/25/09
It's good to see this story high-lighted on the Front Page. Your message is so good. Congratulations.