The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your camp-meeting descriptions. I haven't been to one in Canada, but I've been to many a campmeeting service. Your last line is priceless.
Very good! I'd love to see this expanded, with more dialogue that we get to know this family better...maybe a glimpse into the thoughts of the lady in the 2nd row. I was very interested in this story.