The Official Writing Challenge
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Great ending.. this would make a great devotional..
Wow! What a wonderful message. I enjoyed the way the story is intertwined with the last paragraph. Good job with descriptions. You have a talent for writing devotionals. Great job!
Well written and extremely thought-provoking. You brought these characters to life with rich details and descriptions that held my interest throughout the story. The ending was especially beautiful. Keep Writing!
I love the changes you made. They really brought the story to life! You may have found your creative outlet! I look forward to the next story!
"No, Mom, I wasn't looking down."

To me, this is the crux of the story! Loved it. Great devotional material. Few words, great message.
Ah... what a great message! I love covered bridges. They make me feel like I'm walking back in time.
Great story!
In the top ten FOR SURE.

Loved the title, the work, and the words.

Thanks for taking the time to write this.

There are a LOT of good entries this week.

Hope you place high with this one.

May God bless!

Dan Blankenship