The Official Writing Challenge
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Oooh, I can see so much more happening in this story! I want more! I want to know what else happens next and all. I loved the ending and the description with 'bees' in her stomach. that was just creative. nice job! ^_^
Very good, but just when it really grabbed me, it ended.

Longer next time, please.

May God bless.

Dan Blankenship