The Official Writing Challenge
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An excellent portrayal of this familiar journey! I liked the last two verses best. Good job with this! ^_^
08/08/08
This is lovely. Very well written, with strong imagery.
WOW! Very moving.

I started to copy verses to post here and comment on, when I realized that I liked the WHOLE poem.

Great work and a joy to read.