The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the wry voice/tone in this piece. It's short and sweet, making it easy to read. My only note was a typo: "incase" should be "in case" otherwise, good job! ^_^
07/24/08
Nice job! I agree with your presentation. Just need to work on the spelling a little. In the first sentence thought with a "t" and at the end I believe the word should have been through, with an "r". Keep entering.