The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/08
I love this. It's so true and very accurate. Adorable.
07/24/08
forgot something. This is my favorite beginner article so far.
07/26/08
*smile* Yes, our society has changed. I have to smile at how the younger generation clings to their phones like pacifiers. Well written!
07/26/08
Fun and well-written poem and oh so true!
07/31/08
This was so cute! I loved how well you rhymed and kept the cadence - beyond my abilities! Keep it up!
What a fun piece of poetry. But oh such an Ode to How Much our Cellphones actually Own Us.
08/04/08
What a clever, delightful poem. What are you doing in "Beginners"? I enjoyed this so much. Oh for the knack of bringing a message in a challenge and at the same time, bringing levity into our lives. I HOPE (and know) that there WONT be cell phones in heaven. We wont need any, will we??...Helen (p.s. - thanks for your comment on Bookworm.)