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07/17/08
This passage is so beautifully described, that I could almost taste those "hot dogs" as I read it. It is wonderful in its image-creating power:


"One of our favorite games was to pretend that we owned a hot dog stand. We would spend all morning gathering tin can tops for buns, yellow flowers for mustard, sweet pea leaves for relish and cat tails that we picked from a marshy area that was near by. We would then sell the makeshift hot dogs to each other."

(I can just imagine, though, what your mother thought of her children handling tin can tops-ouch!) This entry is a simple and touching story of your special childhood remembrances; a lovely glimpse back into a simpler time.
07/20/08
Fun memories of the past are such valuable things. Reliving these memories puts a smile, and sometimes remembering such moments brings forth joy. You have successfully captured that feeling and memory in your article.
07/22/08
Short and sweet and to the point... and right on topic. I liked it. :0)