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07/17/08
This is a touching story. We support a family in Kerala, so this really interested me. I recognized the colloquialism, such as 'Rose aunty'. Our 'children' call me 'Helen aunty.' My sister is a missionary to India (AP) area. She often tells about the hungry people there. So your story really touched my heart. I can tell that English is not your first language, so I hope the judges recognize this. I hope you win on this one. You have MY vote - not that THAT counts for anything...Hope you contact me sometime and tell me more of this story, and others. I look for missionary stories for my website: Occupy Till I Come...Helen
Thanks for sharing this story! It is certainly unique and I liked the ending especially. This was great, filled with emotion and such, I was hoping that there would be food and no more troubles. ^_^