The Official Writing Challenge
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What an interesting little piece! I like the short pace of this and the POV. Nicely done, my only note is two typos. ^_^

allot-should be A lot

and laundry mat should be-laundromat

Otherwise, well done, your last line is great! ^_^
I enjoyed your insights into memory (or the lack of memory). I am in my fifties, and I have learned to keep pen and paper close. Otherwise, I will walk into Wal-mart with NO idea why I am there. Keep up the writing. You can always let the computer help with little things. I love to let my sister proofread for me. Thanks for the article.