The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww! This was a good story! I was rooting for this mom that she'd be able to connect with Cheryl, I loved the bit of suspense and everything in this. Nicely done! ^_^
06/14/08
Very evocative, very well-written.
06/16/08
Good story. Good depiction of Mom's emotional turmoil.
06/17/08
This is very well written - great dialog. I got lost in the story. I love the ending. Great job!
Wonderful job on this and congratulations!