The Official Writing Challenge
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An interesting take on the topic. I enjoyed the build-up to the reunion.
Wow! Very good descriptions that make the reader feel the escalating emotions.
Well written! **THIS SPARKLES**
Yikes!!! What a great build up of suspense! I only wish you had more words to finish out this fabulous story instead of wrapping it all up in one last paragraph. The ending is my only red ink - this is very well written.
Wowsers PepperGardenMan! This was great. I loved it. I'm with Catrina, I wish you could have had more words. This definitely needs a longer word count to do it full justice. Well done my friend!!
Fantastic suspense all the way through. I hope this story places well this week.
Great suspenseful story, and a well deserved win! Congratulations!
WOW. Much derserved win here, can't wait to read more from you.

Wow. I did not see this coming at all! This was excellent and indeed the reason why you were the number one winner. You are an excellent writer and you will advance quickly for sure.