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You've done well to capture the heartbeat of a household in this neat little piece! I enjoyed the read and the way you described how it wasn't the outside that counted, but the 'home' and the 'family'. Nice job! ^_^
I liked the description of the difference between a home and a house. You've done a good job of describing it. I would've liked to know more of your parents and those sisters you mentioned and less of the hardships. But well done keep it up.
Great allusion in the last paragraph!
My favorite part was the last paragraph... loved the pinnochia comparison.. Great job!
We had one of those houses where "the wind howled through the turn of the century window." :) Your Mom sounds like an amazing woman. I like the alliteration of you title (which is perfect for this story.) Nice work on this.
I appreciate you giving us a glimpse into your family life and the home in which you lived in. :)
I'm happy to find you and your easy-reading style. I related to your descriptions as the visuals are excellent. Welcome to FW.