The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
I love fairs. They are full of colors, sounds, smells,sights, and tastes. Try to use your senses in your writing.
Keep writing.
Good choice to compare these two girls for the topic. You made appropriate selections for your comparisons and gave clear detail. There were some grammatical errors which detracted from the reading, such as "there' for 'their'. Good job with the topic. :)