The Official Writing Challenge
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Hmmm, lots going on here, with a good point! I liked your last verse the best though. ^_^
Good thoughts easily flowing in poem form. I saw an ABAB pattern which changed A and B every four lines, so I would have thought every four lines would have been a different stanza, but then, the only poetry I know is the basic "Roses are red..." stuff. :) Nice job.