The Official Writing Challenge
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Sam sounds like he was quite an amazing dog. I loved how you summed up just what 'pets' are to so many of us. Wonderful writing-this is a favorite of mine! ^_^
05/27/08
You are an excellent writer! This piece flowed and gave good information. I wouldn't change anything because of the style you chose. If you did want to switch it up and make it abit longer--try adding some dialogue to make it more personal--when the man had to go buy the dog card for example. Your style is great!