The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
Yes, God loves birds and rabbits, too.

Watch out for spelling errors and more paragraphs make a story easier for the reader.

Thanks for sharing about your pets.
05/22/08
I can see that you really enjoy your bird and rabbit.
It would make your writing better if you can find another Beginner buddy to help you proof for spelling and grammar errors.
Well done.
They sound like nice pets to own and glad you enjoy them.