The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/05
Excellent reminder of the truly important. How little we say what we should.
Such a touching essay. I wouldn't be too sure that God doesn't deliver 'I love you's even after death.
06/14/05
well done...I think for a lot of fathers it's hard to receive...they feel more comfortable providing.
06/15/05
Good article, I think it could have ended at the "kiddo," the second person imperitives, in the final paragraphs, kinda differed from the tone of the story.
A good read, very interesting. Good job showing your relationship with your dad. Your dad's personality came through very nicely.
06/18/05
What a wonderful example of love through works -even if not in words. A good lesson to all those who have trouble saying the words.