The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, lots going on in this story! There seems to be so much happening that I wish there was more room so you could've fleshed it out more. This was nice. ^_^
05/10/08
I loved the testimony of God's work through a praying grandmother! At the end you seemed to try and cram a lot in, in just a few lines. Try to focus on one main theme to build the story around. Thanks for sharing about your brother and God's hand in his life.