The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, what a story! I liked the ryhme that you had, it was a tad force in the line with "wonder why" but otherwise, very nicely done! ^_^
05/02/08
The message in the poem is very clear, with sentiments we can all understand and feel. A well written piece, conveyed with clarity and in simplicity.