The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/08
A lot in this piece! I'd love to hear "more of the story," if you know what I mean. You definitely piqued my interest.
As Joanne said, I too would have loved more. I am so glad you and your Dad talk now. Thank you for allowing us a glimpse into your life. Nicely written.
04/30/08
I hate to sound like a broken record but I too would like to hear more, particularly the thread related to the intriguing word choice of everything going pear-shaped. That caught my eye and I looked back to the introduction to see if I had missed the original shaped. Then I skimmed ahead to find some further description related to the shape. Yeah, I was a little disappointed--but I guess I'll get over it.