The Official Writing Challenge
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What a lovely journey through the times and the dreaded 'generation gap'. You did well in showing that being a grandparent is 'timeless' it's still the same love and presence that the grandchildren crave and want. This is special. Great job. ^_^
04/11/08
Beautiful. Time changes many things, but the eternal ones...love and joy...remain the same. Wonderfully done.
04/11/08
The title made it sound more like a story about death, but in reality it is really sweet.
I loved the contrast that you showed here. The idea that things change but the love of a grandmother does not shines through in this.

Excellent writing here. I look forward to reading future entries from you. :)
04/18/08
Congratulations on your 3rd place. I love the relaxing voice of this piece.

This is my favorite part: "Not cows, but computers; not vegetable gardens, but pasta on a Saturday night..." Love the contrast.

Good job.