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This gave me goosebumps! You did well with atmosphere and especially with 'showing' how special the grandmother was, without 'telling' us. It made this story more real! Great job! ^_^
You did an excellent job of building up tension and then calming the reader back down with a happy ending.

I'm glad to hear that your grandmother survived. What a blessing from God. :)

Thank you for sharing this.
04/15/08
Thanks for this frank, honest and moving account. When faced with losng loved ones it can be hard to hang on in there with trust.
Glad things turned out well for you and thanks again for sharing.