The Official Writing Challenge
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Very sweet words.

Parts of this article seemed to have rhythm and parts didn't. I don't know if this was intentional or not, but I am no expert on poetry or prose, so I can't comment much on this aspect.

You did a great job with this. I really appreciate you sharing it. Keep up the great writing.
04/10/08
This is sweet. I especially like the line below.

"And she smiled love from her sick bed."

To "smile love" is a grandparent expression if I ever heard one.


A lovely poem in honor of your grandmother.

The impression she left on you is easy to see as you strive to give your grandchildren love and attention as she did for you.

Well done!
04/10/08
We often don't realize how many memories we make with our loved ones until they're no longer with us. Each and every "ordinary" day becomes a precious memory to treasure later on. Beautiful tribute to your grandmother.