The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 784 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
03/14/08
What a fascinating life you've had, and you've used one of my favorite words: serendipity.

One note: Gilead had a balm, not a balsam.

I'd love to visit there some day!
03/15/08
Wow! What a place to live! I would love to read more from you about your adventures and your life with your kids. Such a wealth of possible writing topics!
Laury
What a privilege to see Jerusalem. To walk where Jesus walked, and possibly pray in the Garden of Gethsemane. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of your discoveries. Well done.
My special prayer is to visit Jesruselum and see all those places. I liked that you used some similies and metaphors like our hearts were opend like barn doors". Keep trying new techiques and keep giving us more glimses into fascinating places!