The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/08
I love baby stories!
I also love descriptions. I want to know about the children. What did they look like? What is the home like?
Good dialogue...keep writing.
03/09/08
I loved this piece. I was blessed.
True, true. God has a thousand ways. Life can sure dish it up, but thank God for Jesus Christ.
03/10/08
Very well done--you're a very good writer.

I felt that the last section, and particularly the past few paragraphs, were a bit rushed and "summarized", as opposed to the rest of the sections which beautifully showed your readers your main character's story.

Perhaps there will be "five" again someday--we can hope!
I can feel Carla's pain. Sometimes when we are at our lowest point is when we really see our need for God. Good story, keep up the work.

MEL
YOu pulled me in and kept me enthralled. Very nice job!
Stark picture of the importance of communication between a husband and wife. Nice job. :)