The Official Writing Challenge
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What a precious memory you have shared. Thank you. The writing is descriptive and clear. :)
There you go girl... great work... this is from he heart this is where true stories lie... from the heart and the lives of you and those around you... all you have to do then is write...

Dad would have been proud...

Love Gary
03/02/08
Very good story telling here. I can really tell you wrote from your heart. You have some errors that can be easily fixed. It would really help you if you found a person to proof for you before submitting. Keep up the great work!
Laury
03/04/08
Very powerful story, thanks for sharing it. God bless :)
07/18/08
We may not receive the emotional love we require, but nevertheless our dads loved us. Anita