The Official Writing Challenge
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This hurts, for sure, thanks for a great reminder. For your sake, I hope this is a wonderful piece of fiction and not fact. Keep up the good words.
Dramatically poignant. Well written. Super verse selection at the end. :)
03/02/08
Hi, quite a sad story, well written thanks and keep writing.
03/02/08
powerful story
03/02/08
This is very good writing. I love your descriptions at the beginning. You put lots of emotion here. Good job!
Laury
03/03/08
Wonderful story with powerful emotions and vivid descriptions. Keep writing.