The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this a lot. I felt the chaos and anxiety the MC felt oh too clearly. I was a single parent when my kids were little. God provided for me as he was about to for the heroine of this story. Good job keeping my interest! God works just like that...with the bulletin that wouldn't be discarded!
03/01/08
Hooray for your courage to tell it like is.
I've been there - God does meet us where we're at.
Great job sounds like you've been spying at my house..
03/04/08
Your title has a lot of meat in it, and your story brings the message home. Those "God-incidences" are the best ones of all.
03/04/08
Great writing. Loved how the Lord kept having to take the bulletin out of the trash! Ah, sometimes we need things placed right in front of us to "get" it! God is good! God bless :)
03/05/08
With a little polish this story would pack even more punch. I would like to see a different title that draws attention to that pesky paper that kept bouncing out of the trash! Great job.