The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
This is a nice piece. At least you voted, I was running late in the morning and then forgot all about it that evening! Argh! Keep on writing!
Laury
02/15/08
I never feel like I am informed enough.. be proud you voted.. Keep Writing.
02/17/08
Good story here. You may want to consider ending the story with the main character walking out of the building and thinking about the mistake made. Just my opinion. Keep writing.