The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Ah, how sweet is that? And on Valentine's Day, too:) Very nice entry. Keep on writing!
Laury
02/16/08
Thanks for sharing that sweet story! Great supportive wife to use a mess and turn it around to something good! God bless :)
02/17/08
Well written. I could relate to the frozen soda can exploding.
Sweet tribute to your wife. :)
02/19/08
This is choice! I enjoyed reading it, then read it to my husband and laughed again. He, being a nurse, corrected that caffeinated capillaries don't expand but constrict. It's the caffein that speeds up the heart rate, making one more alert. A minor technicality. Good work!
02/22/08
Congratulations, Steve, on placing 11th in your level with this piece. Great work!