The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/08
Thank you for sharing your childhood memories with us. You could expand this more if you wrote about an example of one of those times you were upset. Keep on writing!
Laury
Sounds like a true childhood memory. Keep writing, and make it a little longer next time.
02/18/08
Ahhh... What a wonderful mother you had! I was hoping for a little more.
good job
Nice telling. Very personal. FYI-it would help the reader if you put 2 spaces after the period at the end of each sentence. Helps the reader separate phrases and hold onto the thought of the sentence. :)