The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/08
Wow! This is a great devotional! You have very good thoughts that you've shared! I love your 3rd paragraph. Excellent and I believe, right on topic.
Laury
02/13/08
Wonderful imagery - the chairs (especially at the end), the kite. I agree - the 3rd paragraph is such a wonderful analogy. The first paragraph captures the loneliness - the vacant chair, "do I celebrate", the lingering aroma. So much to like in this piece. Keep writing and entering. I think your writing will take flight to another level.
02/14/08
Absolutely beautiful! What a wonderful way of looking at this topic! Great job!
02/15/08
Congratulations on being highly commended! I loved this entry. Keep on writing. You'll be moving up soon!
Laury
02/15/08
Congrats on your HC and your top 40 placing this week. (Check out the message boards if you haven't already). I loved this. Keep writing!
02/15/08
I love your beautiful story. Your kite image is so creative. Congrats on your level placing!