The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/08
This was a well-written story. I would watch for an words that you may be using over and over again, such as party in the first paragaph. It's very distracting. Keep on writing! You have talent:)
Laury
Nice that your MC began to realize how many other people suffer from the bad choices one makes. :)
I like how this ended, and it definitely fit the topic. Thanks for sharing!
02/14/08
Good story, good dialogue. Congrats on the win!
02/15/08
Congratulations on your 2nd place! Great job!
Laury