The Official Writing Challenge
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A good simple devotional, that points out the problems of living double lives. It would be good to actually give the Bible reference (Romans 12:2) in a devotional.
Try reading your entry aloud to pick up on typos, (you have 'are' but I think you meant 'our') if you can get someone (maybe a Challenge Buddy) to read it for you, that's better still. Keep writing and honing the gift God has given you.
You have very good points in this devotional. Please proofread your work, though. Mistakes distract from your point and that's not what you want to happen. Keep on writing!