The Official Writing Challenge
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A good simple devotional, that points out the problems of living double lives. It would be good to actually give the Bible reference (Romans 12:2) in a devotional.
Try reading your entry aloud to pick up on typos, (you have 'are' but I think you meant 'our') if you can get someone (maybe a Challenge Buddy) to read it for you, that's better still. Keep writing and honing the gift God has given you.
02/08/08
You have very good points in this devotional. Please proofread your work, though. Mistakes distract from your point and that's not what you want to happen. Keep on writing!
Laury