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Unique piece. Interesting to have the ending be the same as the beginning. Somewhat unresolved that there were no consequences for the main character taking more than could pay for.
02/01/08
Excellent allegory!
02/02/08
I love allegories! You did a good job! Make sure you get someone to proofread your work before you send it off, though. It's so hard to find our own mistakes. Keep up your writing. You have talent!
Laury
02/03/08
Very good! This kept my attention to the end and since I work in retail, I certainly see this emptiness in a lot of faces I see. Keep up the good writing!
Marilyn
02/05/08
You made the list for the Beginner Blessings this week! Congratulations! Here is the link: http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=17610
It is so true that money and "things" cannot possibly begin to fill the voids in our lives. Those voids can only be filled by God.

Do they really make five hundred dollar bills? If so, I guess I learn something new every day. :)

You have talent! Great article!