The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/08
This is a very good story. Many of us had to make a decision in our jobs such as this one. Hind sight is a good teacher, for sure. Make sure you proofread your entries. You spelled Keith's name 2 different ways. I did that on my entry a couple of weeks ago! Make sure you put a line between paragraphs to make for easier reading. Keep on writing!
Laury
I like this! Well written and too the topic.

How easy it is for fear to overtake faith at times.

Only one little thing, pop a line between your paragraphs, it makes it easier to read.
02/02/08
So many people have to deal with this decision! I'm sure that you'll hit home with all of them.
As Christians, I think we all face this kind of dilemma at some point in life (sometimes more than once). I like the message. We all have to work at keeping God first in our lives. :)