The Official Writing Challenge
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Oooh, what intrigue! I like this. I didn't know where you were going with this until the end. Great writing! Great use of dialogue! Good job!
Really good fairy tale--I wish you'd used all of your words, and added more character development. Resist the temptation to summarize the ending--you've got great potential and you did a super job with the topic of the see.
Nice story! I liked the "kingly" language. I wanted more, though.
I wanted to know the characters better so I could grasp the reason the prince and his future bride wanted to poison the king.
Nice take on the topic. You write well.
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