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Topic: Illustrate the meaning of “Don’t Try to Walk before You Can Crawl” (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (01/17/08)
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By Carol Shaffron
01/17/08 -
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God calling.
Oh, Hello God and how are you today?
Let's dispense with the small talk and get down to business, shall we.
Uh, Okay. Yes, Sir, You are the Boss.
Am I? Am I really?
Y e e e ss
Then why do you fail to show up to our corporate meetings?
What?
silence
uhhhmmnnn, no excuses.
How do you imagine you are going to find out what's going on when you fail to show up?
I have things to show and tell, and you can't even show up! Do you not realize the magnitude of this operation we're running?
We?
Did I not give you dominion?
silence
Did I not command you to subdue the earth?
silence
How will you take dominion and subdue the earth if you cannot even show up? if you will not even subdue the flesh you're dwelling in? The purpose of these meetings are for you to become so familiar with the blueprints you know what's next. How do you imagine you can subdue the earth, take dominion and recover what was forfeited when you let every little distraction keep you from corporate meetings?
I have things to unveil!
Furthermore, I miss you. I miss your companionship. I miss your affection. I miss your adoration. I miss your voice praising me for those things I have already shown you. Do you imagine that's all there is? I have things to unveil to you you have no idea of.
But I can't if you fail to show up and be attentive...
Your loss.
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It was hard to know who was speaking without the quote marks. It was assumed that each new paragraph was a new speaker. I like to write with only dialogue too.
Good job...keep writing