The Official Writing Challenge
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Had to double check that I was reading beginner work. Very well done. I felt like I was there...so SAD! What a great friend to point her back to Christ's forgiveness.
01/10/08
Very well-written, and spot on topic.

A bit heavy on the adjectives at times. My biggest comment would be that you're a better writer than this plot; it's a familiar story, and your skills are certainly far more than adequate--now take it to another level, and give this situation some sort of twist to make it stand out.

I love your title; it certainly tells it all! I'm a big fan of one-word titles.
01/10/08
I know a few young ladies I should have read this! Thank-you for putting this together so well. Well written and flows perfectly.
This is good and I must admit I was suprised to find it in Beginners. Keep writing!
01/15/08
So sad...more so because it happens all too often in our society!
Good job with the dialogue.
Keep writing.
01/18/08
Congratulations, Holly, on placing seventh in level 1. Great work!
01/22/08
God has blessed you with a wonderful gift with words. I look forward to reading more from you!