The Official Writing Challenge
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Had to double check that I was reading beginner work. Very well done. I felt like I was SAD! What a great friend to point her back to Christ's forgiveness.
Very well-written, and spot on topic.

A bit heavy on the adjectives at times. My biggest comment would be that you're a better writer than this plot; it's a familiar story, and your skills are certainly far more than adequate--now take it to another level, and give this situation some sort of twist to make it stand out.

I love your title; it certainly tells it all! I'm a big fan of one-word titles.
I know a few young ladies I should have read this! Thank-you for putting this together so well. Well written and flows perfectly.
This is good and I must admit I was suprised to find it in Beginners. Keep writing!
So sad...more so because it happens all too often in our society!
Good job with the dialogue.
Keep writing.
Congratulations, Holly, on placing seventh in level 1. Great work!
God has blessed you with a wonderful gift with words. I look forward to reading more from you!