The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
God's timeliness is amazing, isn't it?

For the 1st two paragraphs, you flip-flopped tenses a little bit until you settled into a comfortable past tense. This is perhaps a bit light on the topic...

I really liked the way you started with the bus example.
01/10/08
I love how God meets our needs--right on time. Catching the bus was a good example of that.
01/12/08
God's timing is perfect.
It may help you to find a challenge buddy to help with grammar and punctuation.
Good job...keep writing.