The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! What great imagery!
You set it up and led the reader through each scene very well.
It surprised me at the end, that the speaker had a last chance.
Good writing, keep it up!
I enjoyed the voice of this piece. You wrote very well. I don't think that you needed the quote at the beggining- you could have saved on the word count. I wanted to read more of your prose.
Great imagery in this entry!
Congratulations on your 2nd place in beginners. This story is filled with imagery and emotion. The ending is filled with hope. Love it!
Congratulations on your second place in level 1, Sylvia. By the way, your entry also placed 26th overall. Great job!
You wrote a very powerful interpretation of this theme.