The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/08
Wow! What great imagery!
You set it up and led the reader through each scene very well.
It surprised me at the end, that the speaker had a last chance.
Good writing, keep it up!
01/10/08
I enjoyed the voice of this piece. You wrote very well. I don't think that you needed the quote at the beggining- you could have saved on the word count. I wanted to read more of your prose.
01/11/08
Great imagery in this entry!
01/17/08
Congratulations on your 2nd place in beginners. This story is filled with imagery and emotion. The ending is filled with hope. Love it!
01/18/08
Congratulations on your second place in level 1, Sylvia. By the way, your entry also placed 26th overall. Great job!
You wrote a very powerful interpretation of this theme.