The Official Writing Challenge
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Let go and let God ---definetly a word in due season for me...now to embrace it! Thank-you for writing this. I liked the friendship between the two women and the strength of their faith and trust in God.
I really enjoyed your story and it's message. Keep writing!
12/16/07
... "understanding began to dawn like a brilliant sunrise on the shores of her storm tossed heart" -Fantastic line. Keep writing!
12/16/07
I love that verse! So glad that Melissa finally found her rest.
12/18/07
Good dialogue! It would have helped to know more of what Melissa had been doing.
What were her own efforts? What made her frustrated?
This is good.