The Official Writing Challenge
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This entry touched my heart deeply. Your message was both compelling and beautiful at the same time. Very good, keep on writing!
I could feel your passion in this piece. Very moving and convicting. Keep writing!
Thank you for sharing this testimony.
The title didn't match the theme of this essay. Perhaps something more about convicting sermons.
Keep writing.
Hey Norms, congrats on your 11th placing. Thanks for bringing that beautifull old hymn to my remembrance, we sometimes forget that a lot of these old hymns were birthed through much adversity and just how beautifull and true the words really are. Being a guy I still battle with the concept of being a "bride", it really is a girl thing, that we as guys just dont fully comprehend. Regards, Ken.
Liked it a lot and thanks. The flow was hindered by the length of the bookends; they take over the reader too much for the piece. Expand on the "on my way to hell" comment and you might balance it out a bit more.