The Official Writing Challenge
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You brought your pov out well here. I would have liked to seen a little more writing here, however. What you have expresses itself well.
11/25/07
You did a nice job on this piece and I agree -- you could have written so much more. You have something to say -- don't be scared to share it. If you write it, we will read it:)
Laury
11/26/07
I loved this! You are good! Hot confusion - excellent description! I too would love to see this developed abit more - other than that - you write so well!! Great job!