The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
This was a very creative approach--to show the production of a video, rather than many other things that might happen at a pulpit.

You may want to look a bit at your punctuation and capitalization of dialogue.

Perhaps an author's note might clarify for the reader who D. James Kennedy was.

Thanks for this original story!
11/25/07
This was interesting. I have never been part of any filming so this was all new to me. It might help if you could get someone to edit your work for you. Keep on writing!
Laury