The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/07
Very sweet story!

Work a bit on more "showing" and less "telling." Provide details for the reader to help us feel as if we are there with you. Another thing that helps with this is a bit of dialogue.

You have a tender way with words in this reminiscence.
11/25/07
You tell a very sweet story. Memories that will last a life time! Keep on writing, I want to hear more of your life story!

Lucie
I decided to read this particular article and found it quite interesting. I followed the story till the end to see where you were going with it. The words "Divine Set Up" comes to mind. God said it is not good for man to be alone. Just think, you did not even realize you were looking for or needed a wife when you first met her. Thanks for sharing, had you not commented on mine I might never have got a chance to read this one. By the way, I will keep in mind what you said.