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11/15/07
I really like this story. What a great reminder of how we can be an encouragement all day long -- by what we say and do.

Great job with the topic, and very well written. And I love football -- so the female assistant coach is a bonus. :)
11/17/07
This is a wonderfully told story with a compassionate main character. Great job.
11/20/07
You've written this very well. I like the imaginary football pass, I thought it was a nice detail to add to your story. I could see that happening. This is well thought out.
11/21/07
We often downplay the work the Lord sends along to us in our ordinary lives, but your entry is a good reminder that God can use even our contacts to help others. We sometimes aren't aware that God is using our lives, our friends, our family members in answer to our heart-felt prayers. Great insight shared in this entry! The dialogue and characterizations are right on target, too.
11/21/07
We should all be like your MC. Wonderful characterization, and reminder to all of us!
I agree, we should all be just like your MC. This was a good read. Well done.