The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/07
Very sweet story. Not sure if you meant for her name to be Evanglism, but by the end of the story I took it that way. Noticed a few things that could be improved upon, including some transitional things, but overall an enjoyable read.
What a lovely story. This had me enthralled from the beginning and I could clearly picture the story as I read it. Thanks for sharing it with us.