The Official Writing Challenge
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What an interesting "angel" angle.
If you make a new paragraph each time a person speaks, it will make it a little easier to read. This has a very thought provoking message.
This is sweet. Great job!
Wouldn't it be a wonderful thing if everyone would learn the simple truth you have offered! I enjoyed reading your story.
Nice story with good Biblical teachings. Paragraphing every time the action/idea/character changed would help the asthetics of the passage and assist the reader to stay focused on content.
Very telling that the little girl didn't recognize Jesus at first. He was a stranger.

Neat story with a good message and I like the way you told it.